The past is not the future
And the future is not the past
So live right here in the moment
And please try to make it last
A fraction of despair
A resemblance of a doubt
If you just try to move foward
You WILL achive salvation
And with your inner demons...
You will no longer bout
The past is not the future
And the future is not the past
So enjoy the fruits of life
And the challenges in which you'll pass
Monday, September 14, 2009
Life
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4 comments:
+3....Make a note of this grade on your grade sheet.
I like what you are doing with the poetry. I think that you are going to produce some interesting things this semester.
One suggestion: forget about trying to make your poetry rhyme for now. Just write from the heart.
This is really nice!
See? You do write well =) I always told you! I like the inner demons part =3 tehe
Good flow, I think this is successful poem, one for the book perhaps?
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